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Open Poetry #48

When Nature Echoes Song

mellowdown
Junior Member

since 2012-12-19

Posts 30
usa

0 posted 2012-12-21 11:08 AM

When Nature echoes listen Dear
And I shall pen a loving kiss
On wings of poesy souvenir

And as you muse in tender bliss
From heart to heart sing along
And I shall pen a loving kiss

In melody of rhyming song
We’ll both embrace a lullaby
From heart to heart sing along

Then softly melancholy sigh
A harmony in Love’s romance,
We’ll both embrace a lullaby

To chorus verse with passion dance
And Darling, sweetly, ever rhyme
A harmony in Love’s romance

Our poet whispers comely mime
When Nature echoes, listen Dear,
And Darling, sweetly ever rhyme
On wings of poesy souvenir

a poem is a sigh
a melody of song
a musical lullaby

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

1 posted 2012-12-21 11:34 AM

I enjoyed reading your beautiful villanelle. Yes a poem is all of that, a sigh and a song and a lullaby. Nicely done mellowdown.

~Victoria~

Life is a great big canvas-Throw all the paint on it you can.
-- Danny Kaye

mellowdown
Junior Member

since 2012-12-19

Posts 30
usa

2 posted 2012-12-22 11:03 AM

Victoria, thank you for stopping by and your kind comment,

a poem is a sigh
a melody of song
a musical lullaby

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