Open Poetry #48 |
So Tender And Mild |
Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
This winter might have froze us without memories, of hope Our creation of fire was borne, of such times Please soothe our hearts as they rattle, our bones Too bad just like poetry our history too rhymes And under and over our footsteps are drawn Weaving us closer from hither, and yon Sewing together the hollow and wind Stitches of certainty good, versus sin The forest of darkness, a pinpoint of light Guiding us forward the wonder, of might Tinsel and tragedy hung quiet, with care The season of hollow day strung, through the air No laughter of past or future, adorning Just presence of sadness on this, Christmas mourning Those holy of infants so tender, and mild Sleep silent in peace now sweet mother, and child |
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mellowdown Junior Member
since 2012-12-19
Posts 30usa |
A beautiful verse song with such sweet sentiments of tender emotion, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Richy, I love your way and your sweet heart! This is indeed a tender write. My heart aches in ways I never knew. ~warm hugs, hon~ |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
thank you Mellow one I appreciate you stopping by and leaving your kind words.. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thank you Lori, yes such a sad season this year with the Newtown tragedy still looming all around us.. it sure is nice to hear from you again, that truly does brighten my days wholeheartedely. Have a fantastic Christmas with your family and friends, thanks for the kind words, your smile alone is always my favorite present |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Heartfelt words and yes lots of mourning this year, not just on Christmas day.I love the sweet illustration. ~Victoria~ [This message has been edited by Victoria (12-20-2012 10:46 AM).] |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"Tinsel and tragedy hung quiet, with care" Indeed it's so. Good Lines. I like the weaving of current events..both seasonal, and situational. "Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance." |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Richy, this is such a wonderful tribute to all of the Sandy Hook little angels! My heart goes out to all the families especially at this time of year with Christmas so close. Just too sad! Merry Christmas to you and your family! Karen >^..^< |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Hi Victoria, its nice to meet you.. thanks so much for leaving a kind note.. take great care.. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Great to hear from you Ice, stay cool.. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
aww thank you Katty Karen for always being there.. your support really is so appreciated.. you have a wonderful holiday season as well.. |
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