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motions of the heart |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
His name held onto the shadows of the wind wrestling themselves from the bottom side of his hair his long eyebrows seemed to turn as her eyes did towards the fall of sight She use to comb his hair onto one side so his motionless face rest easy on the morning pike where her hands seemed to ride along his hips When he woke her eyes found a small window into the bottom of their hardwood floor where his cheeks began to turn as she watched him touch the bottom drawer of his chest just her and a scruffy beard against her collarbone with the soft stare of his eyes welcoming her inside a small cough under the faint trail of the morning rise;. and his hand brushing over his eyes as she heard her name once with his lips around the pin drops of her ears locket |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
This is lovely, Tomer! Ms. E |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very good, my friend... j. |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Ms. E- Happy you enjoyed. Appreciate the comment... Cheers Tomer |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
J- Appreciate it, bud. Hope you're doing well.. Cheers Tomer |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I love your gentle poetic voice. This is a real beauty, Tomer~ *applause* |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Blues - Happy you enjoyed it so much. I appreciate the kind words...Truly. Hope you're well. Cheers Tomer |
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