Open Poetry #48 |
A Women's Fury |
ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
In the distance storm clouds gather No calm, no peace in this matter She bares cold rain and heavy hail Bashing, smashing a tearful wail Oh do not dare try to flatter In the distance storm clouds gather [This message has been edited by ken206573 (11-27-2012 11:44 AM).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Oh yes a woman scorned. You described it well. Enjoyed. A poem is never finished, only abandoned. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Time to make yourself scarce, that's what time it is. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
Thanks for your comments, happy that you enjoyed it. |
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Ethern Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 150on a plane |
a very accurate depiction, in my opinion. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
No such thing as a perfect storm! Good on ya, Ken~ |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
Thank you for all your comments, happy to see that you all enjoyed the poem. True there is never a perfect storm like a women's scorn is what my sister's tell me. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Nice writing ken. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
Thanks for stopping by and given it a read. |
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