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Open Poetry #48

Tandem Twain (Senryus)

Ethern
Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 150
on a plane

0 posted 2012-11-13 12:24 PM

melding horizon
lovers embracing dearly
so near the sunrise

morning sparrow lights
then bluejay and cardinal
new day, same old love

For Donna: my first and last, and still my only always.

r v wooo
Senior Member

since 2007-08-07

Posts 656

1 posted 2012-11-13 12:34 PM

intersting and igniting thought...enjoy bird metaphors. RV

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2012-11-13 12:40 PM

Enjoyed Ethern, Im personally like an owl,I like the night time.ha

~V~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2012-11-13 12:57 PM

Nice, I'm a bird man through and through.

j.

Ethern
Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 150
on a plane

4 posted 2012-11-13 02:38 PM

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