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Ebb Tide
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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 this poet straddles uneasy tides interweaved inside a labyrinth of disappointment-filled notions jammed between optimism and misery ©September 27, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Beautiful photo Jerry. Enjoyed your words as always. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks, Victoria, so are your words compelling . . . ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I can so relate to this Jerry! "jammed between optimism and misery" I feel ya! lori  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yep, I think you can, Lori. Appreciate you dropping by. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I swear you could have written this one about me. A lot packed into this little piece. Nicely done, friend. Michael |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Much thanks, Michael. Yeah, there a lot of us (poets) who fit that mold. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Relating here, Jerry. Ida |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
yep, seems this is about more than one poet here.......great write... |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Maybe not such a bad place to be, at times. Resistance/friction can build strength/energy. Enjoyed the read. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, Ida, for relating to this one. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
It does seem that way, doesn't it Karen. Thank you. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You found positive vibes, JL, amid the debris of negativity, good for you ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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