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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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She Said There are times in the early waking hour I reach for dead to the world to caress into consciousness precious moments of affection I know will be stolen away by the every morning pain And in that unaware of my kisses searching hands and closeness pressing I weep Wishing for one who would roll over into a dream come true ©November 9, 2012 / She I Said the whirls of dreamscape smoke manipulate me unrecognizable while my mind is clear my body rides with the wind toward a reward much sweeter than angels smiles for my journey is threefold and more to intercept another's dreamscape as she reaching for the dead with searching hands and finding instead wisps of smoke and more as the smoke become full with flesh pounding love as I clasp you tightly, making my goddess's dream come true in every sense of the word, together at last ©November 9, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (11-10-2012 12:22 PM).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Those kind of dreams are nice. Intercepting another persons dreams,never thought of that. Very creative Jerry. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks, ~V~ for your welcomed and delightful comment. Wouldn't that be something though, to intercept another dreams? I sense the germ of a novel somewhere down the road. I appreciate your thoughts for that. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
It's a wonderful thing to be able to make another's dream a reality. This was beautifully written, Jer. Brought back some very pleasant memories. Michael |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you Michael, I appreciate your thoughts. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
How in the world did I miss the little gem? You are a hard man to keep up with  Good job my friend (as always) lori  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you Lori. Yours thoughts mean much to me. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
hmmm...wish I had dreams as this till now I thought my dreamless nights a blessing |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes, indeed,Karen, there is much to be said about having certain dreams. Thank you so much for stopping by and reading and commenting, I appreciate it very much. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Very nice piece, JP~ come out, come out wherever you are!!! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
My, my Blues, you must have had to go into the dungeon to find this. Than you for commenting on it and thanks also for the invitation back. Not just yet, but i love you for asking. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
What an excellent way to end the day! Reading your thoughts (and dreams). Perfect writing, my friend!! JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
What a nice thing to say, JL, and I appreciate it very much. Thank you. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Jerry the first one is so sad, so achingly evocative! A |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes, Amaryllis, I completely agree with your dynamite comment concerning the "She Said" part of this poem. Thank you for being here. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I like the idea of that...intercepting another's dreams. Very Cool. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Appreciate the input, Diamond, thank you for being here. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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