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wild goose |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Wild goose Yesterday, I saw in the autumn sky, crossing innocent and white goose, they went only under the blue sky towards a doubtless wonderful place, They flew by shouting, hoarse sounds and nevertheless polite, which told in the clouds to deviate, and to the curious ones not to hamper them, They flew in tight formation, they were twelve and with experience took turns to overcome the wind, and exceed so all the agonies, What is this country? Have I asked, they answered without stopping, we fly until the exhaustion, it is not for your understanding.... |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
excellent imagery and contemplation of Nature's truths ! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Yann, I absolutely love, love, LOVE this! I could see the geese and hear them honking their beautiful mournful cry throughout the poem and especially loved the conversation between the geese and you. I could tell from your description that you really did watch geese flying in formation because you described it so perfectly. Bravo! Kudos! Owl |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
The sight of wild geese flying is one of natures must beautiful sites, yann and this beautiful poem paints the perfect picture. Ida |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
beautiful! Seeing geese in flight is always wonderous to behold. jo |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Well done, enjoyed reading your words. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks bruce for the kind and generous comment, yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello dina, yes i really see these goose , they are bit very common in brittany, and u even counted them, the poem is entirely true, they were honking too and it was vey enjoyable for the spirit, thanks a lot for reading and commenting yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks idan it was really a great spectacle, and so close of a the town, so unsusual, have a nice day yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks michael for reading and commenting yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello latearrival, these goose bring some solace too, to see them tech us differency between natural and human world, u am always glad to see animal in free, thanks for reading and commenting yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks victoria for commenting gently and graciously, yann |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I wonder if the place they go can be quite so wonderful as the sky they traverse to get there. You got me with the picture you paint here. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks pilgrimage for the supportive comment, the nice reading, yann |
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