JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
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2012-11-02
07:56 AM
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inebriated on cheap California burgundy careening from your wide open kisses your damp body surging against my own on the floor though we tried couldn't make it to the bed so we gorged ourselves hands and fingers, tongues feasting on each other's sensuous delights the last of our breath lethargic now all tangled up with clothes we shed we slept on the floor, sated the heady taste of body parts on our lips we lay dreaming of Love Potion #9 and of the over indulging of kerzillion of kisses
©September 17, 2012 Jerry Pat Bolton
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Jerry Pat Bolton
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Victoria
Member Ascendant
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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2012-11-02
09:48 AM
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I guess ill have to start drinking ha hopefully I can make it to the bed. Good one Jerry
~Victoria~ "If music be the food of love, play on." (William Shakespeare)
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JerryPat2
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South Louisiana
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2012-11-02
09:57 AM
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Well, as the old line goes, Victoria, "Candy is dandy, but liquor is quicker."
Thank you for taking the time to read my poem and comment. You can be assured it is very much appreciated . . .
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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
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2012-11-04
07:45 AM
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Hot as ever! You haven't lost your touch  lori 
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JerryPat2
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South Louisiana
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2012-11-04
07:48 AM
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. . . and I hope I never lose that touch, Lori. Appreciate you going through my poems this morning.~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~
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