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Open Poetry #48
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CastleGuard
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since 2003-04-30
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0 posted 2012-11-01 01:55 AM



A fallen star
Ricoches off
Huddled roofs
Its waning glow 
Flashes in the darkened panes
Time to rest
Even the Earth
Has a place of Solitude
Within my heart...

CG
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secondhanddreampoet
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1 posted 2012-11-01 04:20 AM

VERY pleasant and interesting 'write!'
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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2 posted 2012-11-01 07:00 AM

Like the concept of this fallen star scenario, Fallen Star. Write on.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~
Namyh
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since 2009-01-20
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3 posted 2012-11-03 12:47 PM

CG - I guess even a fallen star can find solitude on Earth, like the rest of us fallen stars who live on it. I like this CastleGuard. Namyh  
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