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Sweet Temptation
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Sweet Temptation |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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You portray sweet temptation behind the bedroom of your smile violet-blue eyes surrender to the needs of a foggy night as you cast your shadow over the body of a one night stand feeding my starvation succulent grapes of wine flowing vineyards of desire I know Ill thirst for you again ~Victoria~ "If music be the food of love, play on." (William Shakespeare) |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Double-edged is this sweet/sour offering. On the one hand it is a chance meeting in the night, as you say, a one-night stand. Still, there is the drippings of blood given to satisfy the Count of the Halloween gore. Either way it is a great poem, but together it is fantastic! ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
OMG...Victoria, you are a Queen of the Nite...a verbal seductress...a 2810! I enjoy your sensuality. Expressive poem, hmmm!RVvvvvvvvvvvv |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Jerry Im so glad you enjoyed. Rv Im glad you enjoyed too. Thank you for your compliments. ~Victoria~ "If music be the food of love, play on." (William Shakespeare) |
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Pweisbrod Junior Member
since 2011-10-14
Posts 27 |
Whoa... nice! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you for peeking in today. ~Victoria~ "If music be the food of love, play on." (William Shakespeare) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice sensual writing...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you James.Glad you enjoyed my words. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. |
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