Open Poetry #48 |
Circles |
Street Poet Member
since 2002-07-07
Posts 82 |
I thought about her as I sat by the lake Watching the moon stare at its own reflection Romantics are most comfortable within their own thoughts Four walls of warm cozy perceptions that isolate them from the Cold world Cold world Look around... love is a dying art Instead of embracing it They kill what they feel Going through life never learning How to use their God giving abilities To paint a lasting impression on the lives around them I thought about her during the drive home Wishing my car could travel on the bridge that unities us No traffic only room for two I cut through a fog or a jazzy haze Kind of blue, just a phase First there was love, then there was hate, then love reappears again The line becomes blurred lovers or friends I thought about her in my dream I was sitting on the porch Watching the sunrise While it erased the darkness from my life All that reminded was her A second beginning, A refreshed start I woke up to a message on my phone from her saying: "Hey I was just thinking about you" Thoughts travel in in circles |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Quite a meandering trip though your thoughts here, Street Poet. Love. The most misunderstood emotion that we have it seems. Your analysis of it bears rereading, which I shall. At a cocktail party, one woman said to another, |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"I thought about her in my dream I was sitting on the porch Watching the sunrise While it erased the darkness from my life All that reminded was her A second beginning, A refreshed start I woke up to a message on my phone from her saying: "Hey I was just thinking about you" Thoughts travel in in circles" Love the "circles" And life is very much as you have depicted here. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Very beautiful and so true. Margherita |
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