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Amberzlynnc
Member

since 2010-08-24

Posts 229
New Jersey

0 posted 2012-10-19 10:00 PM

Sweet snow
Brighten the darkest deep blue night
Deliver us to morning
on your light, crystal wings

True snow
Bury yesterday beneath your mass
Pave the path to tomorrow
in glittering, honest simplicity

Bright snow
Open our eyes in awe of your beauty
Leave relief in our hearts
and assurance of breath

Even after you thaw

-Amber

Ethern
Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 150
on a plane

1 posted 2012-11-13 11:17 AM

love it. this one definately deserves more attention. let's put it back on top so some of our other friends can see it better.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

2 posted 2012-11-13 01:29 PM

Yeah, this is my fav. of yours so far my friend. Very nice.

j.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2012-11-13 01:32 PM

Lovely and I love to watch it snow but not too deep especially on Christmas Day.

~V~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2012-12-03 07:35 PM

Wonderful...James

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2012-12-04 07:05 PM

Beautiful poetry.

The images are crystal clear, and the message is one of continuity and faith everlasting.

Thanks for this~

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

6 posted 2012-12-04 07:46 PM

A beautiful poem, Amberzlynnc.
Ida

ken206573
Member

since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

7 posted 2012-12-06 01:05 PM

this is very beautiful, especailly since I enjoy the snow ALOT!!!!! I wish it would snow soon as much as I like most rainy days, I don't like it during the winter season. Happy Holidays!

soul drifter
Senior Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 711
Colorado

8 posted 2012-12-06 07:57 PM

Lovin' this. What a tremendous flow of words and feeling. It gets up and walks around in my head, leaving fresh white footprints on my mind. Right on!

"I will hang on the hook of your splendor" -Snow Patrol, 'Dark Roman Wine'

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