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Open Poetry #48
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Amberzlynnc
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since 2010-08-24
Posts 229
New Jersey
0 posted 2012-10-17 08:18 PM

This world is so amazing.
This world is such a miracle to even be in existence.
This world would be so bland without
the arts.

I find it mind-boggling that we need to
"spice up"
such an awesome idea as existence
in order to make this life more awesome.

Yet I won't put this book.

-Amber
© Copyright 2012 Amber Corcoran - All Rights Reserved
Ethern
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since 2010-07-01
Posts 150
on a plane
1 posted 2012-11-13 11:20 AM

is this a poem? or is it prose? to me it reads like prose. either way, i appreciate its delightful optimism.
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