Open Poetry #48 |
the sea makes me alive |
2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
La mer me rend vivant et me panse, rêveur, ses lumières sont des cathédrales dansantes, où mon âme recueille les plus douces fleurs, Gueules de loup, brunelles, roses consentantes, La voir c'est aimer l'infini et l'évidence, c'est préférer l'air pur à l'éphémère temps, le souffle des rues a d'amères indécences, que la mer disperse de ses lucides chants. Elle me retient comme une soeur apaisante, tissant doutes et broderies de son enfance, sur la voile qui navigue, douleurs naissantes, Oui vraiment, les tristesses doivent s'en aller, loin de la vieille Europe qui chavire et danse, car la mer nous emporte pour nous consoler... The sea makes me alive and soothes me, dreamer, her lights are dance cathedrals, where my soul collects the softest flowers, Mouths of wolf, brunelles, willing roses, To see her it is to like the infinity and the obvious fact, it is to prefer the pure air in the short-lived time, breath of the streets has bitter indecencies, that the sea scatters wth her lucid singings. She retains me as a soothing sister, weaving doubts and embroidery of her childhood, on the sail which navigates, rising pains, Yes really, the sadnesses have to go away, far from old Europe which capsizes and dances, because the sea takes us to console us... |
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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto |
Wow dazzling display of talent here and I would love to hear these verses recited in its original text. vic edited for boo-boo |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks a lot inspired 8 for the delightful comment, and the nice reading, yann |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Yann, tu comprends si bien la mer que ce n’est pas difficile à croire qu’elle est ta soeur! Owl |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Magnifique, cher Yann! I love this song of your soul. Margherita |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very nice, my friend and this line ..."The sea makes me alive and soothes me," is so true and telling... Enjoyed. j. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
merci diana, tu comprends les "finesses" de chaque détail et c'est un bonheur de lire ton français, amitiés yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thank you so much , margherita for the exquisite comment, have a nice day yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks jwesley for reading and commenting nicely, have a nice day yann |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
grand-fine imagery ! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
You write beautifully of your love of the sea and I always love your "sea poems", yann. Ida |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
The sea has always brought me back to life and been a place to make the caos of living dissaper. loved this. My spirit will rise |
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