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Open Poetry #48

..having to wait

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

0 posted 2012-10-14 07:37 AM

can't say
I suffered enough today...
I'll have to wait
until torment resounds,
for rapt odes to hold sway
~~
..(C)2012 Spiros Zafiris
~~

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-10-14 07:49 AM

Sometimes it seems there is no end to it, Spiros.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2012-10-14 01:42 PM

quote:
I'll have to wait
until torment resounds,
for rapt odes to hold sway

Oh, to be in rapture for an ode ... isn't that just a sweet torment!

Excellent work, Spiros!

Margherita

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

3 posted 2012-10-14 04:30 PM

..friends Jerry and Margherita..>>please don't be surprised if i post a revision
or two of the above poem..seems that nobody is understanding it the way it unraveled
in my twisted head..perhaps tonight or tomorrow i should revise..thanks my friends

..>>spiros
~~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2012-10-27 12:28 PM

Nice writing...James

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

5 posted 2012-10-27 05:03 AM

It seems you have, Spiros, for you birthed this poem.

Owl

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

6 posted 2012-10-27 05:09 PM

..thanks much JamesMichael and Owl..i appreciate
the comments..indeed, i do..>>spiros
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