Open Poetry #48 |
Into the night |
ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
The sky seeped into a navy blue with soft highlights from a setting sun. The wind clings to me with cold hands as leaves like a blazing fire fell gently as snow. Between smoky clouds the moon glows like a full blown flower bathing in the sun, within it's golden rays. Stars climb the sky in search of dreams, a present to give to a wishful child by heart. To those who cast their eyes to a never ending sky. Lets dream again |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Dreams. Without them we perish. You gave a bountiful supply of descriptive line within the confines of this poem, ken . . . ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very well written, Ken. Enjoyed your vision "Into the night" JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
What a beautiful poem, Ken. Glad I found it. Ida |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
enjoyed and agree with jerry's comments my friend. j. |
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