Open Poetry #48 |
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Into the night |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
The sky seeped into a navy blue with soft highlights from a setting sun. The wind clings to me with cold hands as leaves like a blazing fire fell gently as snow. Between smoky clouds the moon glows like a full blown flower bathing in the sun, within it's golden rays. Stars climb the sky in search of dreams, a present to give to a wishful child by heart. To those who cast their eyes to a never ending sky. Lets dream again |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Dreams. Without them we perish. You gave a bountiful supply of descriptive line within the confines of this poem, ken . . . ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very well written, Ken. Enjoyed your vision "Into the night" JL ![]() Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
What a beautiful poem, Ken. Glad I found it. Ida |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
enjoyed and agree with jerry's comments my friend. j. |
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