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Dried Roses |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Thanks to the internet I can stand in front of your house Whenever I want to which is not often It’s not hard to imagine how unhappy I would have been alone there with you In that squat single story two bedroom Wooden frame with its dark front windows Almost needing no blinds I look up and down the street it’s pretty much The same Somehow in the scene one hardly As if in a hurry to be leaving as soon as possible Notices if there are any trees Perhaps there are flowers I’ll bring some The next time I’m around A small bouquet A little symbol for remembering what could Have been to lay upon your door . [This message has been edited by Huan Yi (10-10-2012 03:36 PM).] |
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Ethern Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 150on a plane |
very nice John |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Some men dont realize how much a one stem rose can mean to a woman. So much more then even a bouquet. Enjoyed your words. ~V~ |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
John, you write such interesting story poems. They stimulate the imagination. RV |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Cool, my friend. My wife works as a floral buyer's assistant and she DARES me to buy her flowers!!! One thing less for me to get her. Candy now . . . that's another story!! j. |
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