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Windy Evening
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Windy Evening |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Windy Evening My heart void of reason collecting windy evening thoughts of you… Thoughts fluttering like leaves shimmering with sunsets gleam – warm and glowing sleepy smile simply asking: ‘will tonight bring dreams of you’? And swirls of wind push about conducting well-chosen inner smiles – hard kept secretes, enouncing evermore ardent and clear you and I… Evening thoughts trying desperately to escape and fly; Yet my heart at rest, no matter how the wind may blow, I’ll be hoping joy at your side, praying peace be your friend, wishing you too, an evening of repose… . .  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Beautifuly my friend...and I absolutely loved the first stanza. j. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your words touch the heart, JL. Your love and longing are beautifully rendered. Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
quote: Lovely thoughts, trying to nudge the dreams your way. Hopefully they were listening, JL. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You've given my Kansas winds a whole new song, JL... this is lovely! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your poem is so calming and sincere. Such a beautiful sentiment, I took away a sense of peace and comfort. Really nice poem, JL~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Thank you all for the kind responses. I really do appreciate it. ((  )). JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Beautiful windy evening thoughts, JL. Ida |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Thanks, Ida!! JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I am so glad that the winds carried your poem to my eyes. Beautiful writing - very touching. A |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Ahhh, your reply is very kind coming from a girl with a dog that has no thumbs...  JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
no matter how the wind may blow, I’ll be hoping joy at your side, praying peace be your friend, wishing you too, an evening of repose… What wonderful thoughts to be having of someone! Whatever the weather, they're lucky to have you in their life. This is just gorgeous!! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Thank you sweet-lady, Suthern! Appreciate the kind words. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Your poem was a wish on the wind of sweet serenity. It was a lovely comfort to read and much enjoyed JL. Thank you lori |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Thank you Lori!! JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
What a pleasant and beautiful read this was... as all dreams should be. Well done. Michael |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
A soft and pleasant poem.I "love soft and pretty" instead of love songs that bemoan the hurt. Thanks.Enjoyed. |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Lovely, JL, Ms. E |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Thank you Mr. M... ------------- Thank you, jo. ------------- Ms. E. Thanks! JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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