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Open Poetry #48

Do you remember?

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2012-09-20 08:56 PM

Do you remember?
The feeling of grass between your toes
The stars above your head
Hands held
Eyes locked

When did the storm start?
Lightening between words
A flood to break the gates
Where's my safety net?
Where's my life jacket?
Should I crack the wine
Dance in the rubble

Let it be
Just let it be
All that I am
Won't ever be good enough

Just let it be

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

1 posted 2012-09-23 05:42 PM

That is the lie they want us to believe...don't be taken in...who you are is perfect for you...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2012-09-24 12:24 PM

You depict the unraveling so well.

Sad poem, that helpless feeling leaves one feeling so empty.

Your expression is spot on.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2012-09-25 01:32 AM

great imagery and questionning , thanks for the fine penning,

yann

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