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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2012-09-20 06:28 AM

It is pain that drips from my lonely poets pen,
black drops of blood, spilling unto parchment,
nights howl, runs through a hollow heart,
these tears of midnight, drip, endlessly,

Ache , pain, covers me in solitude ,
we share time, evenings, together,
you remember? you introduced us,
at the mention of goodbye,

Oh this heart , this wretched withered heart,
all tattered, torn, broken, scorned,
buried in loneliness , covered by hurt,
deflated , evaporated, like dust,
from dirt.

Loves death came without warning.

Millette August 29th 2012

Will my words stick like glue to your heart? it is the paste that keeps us together~

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-09-20 06:35 AM

quote:
Loves death came without warning.

I know that is hard to deal with. You think the world will never be the same, but it will, and it will even be better, though right now you won't be able to see or understand that premise.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

2 posted 2012-09-20 09:44 AM

good piece, my friend. could feel everything.
Without warning is pretty hard to take, but it's better than slow, lingering...

j.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2012-09-20 03:54 PM

you remember? you introduced us,
at the mention of goodbye,

Our pens learn a whole new vocabulary then. *sigh* Beautiful write on a sad situation.

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

4 posted 2012-09-22 10:56 PM

My heart goes out to you but Jerry is right it is best quickly...love will surely find you again...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

5 posted 2012-09-24 10:55 AM

Welcome back... sure has been awhile. I like the dark tinge to this one, or at least can relate to it. Hope to see more soon.

Michael

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

6 posted 2012-09-26 01:27 AM

Thanks to each and everyone of you, for your kindness and warm welcome back, and for your comments!

Feels good to be back home...looking forward to reading, replying and posting...((((HUGS)))

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

7 posted 2012-09-27 01:21 AM

This one is dark, and painfull. A stark contrast to "Unspoken Love".
I would hope that they do not refer to the same 'love' - that would be truly sad.
Still, well done, ARH.
CG

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

8 posted 2012-09-27 01:27 AM

this is so sad, heart broken changes everything , only time can cure love death, thanks for the poignant and well written poem,

yann

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

9 posted 2012-09-29 01:46 PM

you finely 'pen' both the light and dark side of Romance/Romanticism so well !

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2012-09-29 07:34 PM

Enjoyed this fine writing...James

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

11 posted 2012-10-05 11:51 PM

Welcome back, ARH. It's good to read your words again.

A

Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

12 posted 2012-10-06 06:35 PM

nice to have a place to come back to when days like these shroud us with their weight..

nice to see you still writing my friend.. hoping all is well

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

13 posted 2012-10-08 05:51 PM

Sadly beautiful~

Inspired-8
Member

since 2008-04-14

Posts 311
Pluto

14 posted 2012-10-17 02:05 PM

Evocative write my friend
lotsa (((( )))'s for ya.

Vic

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

15 posted 2013-04-15 07:09 AM

HUGS TO EVERYONE, GOOD TO BE BACK!

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

16 posted 2013-04-15 01:52 PM

glad you're back, Ms. fine 'Romanticist' !!

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

17 posted 2013-04-20 04:51 PM

Glad to see you back ARH. Hope you will get to write us some of your lovely poetry about happier times.

Ida

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