Open Poetry #48 |
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In Your Own Hands |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere ![]() |
Taking matters in your own hands you are master of your fate You choose your heaven or a hellish state You can bask in the pleasure of your senses until all that exists is you and your oblivion to all but the taste of sweet lips kissed LGRĀ©9/17/12 [This message has been edited by Lori Grosser Rhoden (09-17-2012 01:56 PM).] |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Oh my. This is a goodie, Lori. Where do you come up with these gems? ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I plagerize public bathroom walls! LOL! No seriously, the blue buffet offers lots in the way of inspiration. Lori ![]() |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Hummm.... Maybe more blue-plate specials and less bathroom visits? No!! Plagiarize away! I don't think the original author would complain too loudly... Lori, you have an very special seductive sense of humor. JL ![]() Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I know JL ![]() Thank you for noticing and appreciating it. Lori ![]() (By the way, the Blue Buffet is my nickname for PIP) |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Ah, like this one... A little rhyme and a great message. Sweet lips to kiss might rescue anyone from that oblivion. Nicely done. Michael |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
...so... in other words: eat, drink, and be merry for tomorrow is not right now...? ![]() -MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
I like youe style, enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks Michael! I appreciate your comments, Lori ![]() |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Yes Mark, something along those lines...a little bit about inhaling your roses so intently that for a time thst pleasure overrides everything else. Lori ![]() |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks Kat! I appreciate it! Lori ![]() |
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