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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2012-09-11 06:13 AM

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My heart, dark, like a starless night,
Looking toward a primitive light,
Break of day.
Think not morning shall come,
While my heart stays dark
There's no guarantee of crack of dawn

©August 25, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2012-09-11 01:33 PM

How true my friend. None of knows what tomorrow will bring or if we will see it at all. good write

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-09-11 02:07 PM

Thank you, Lori.

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jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2012-09-11 03:45 PM

Awesome line ... "My heart, dark, like a starless night, Looking toward a primitive light," ....

Nice!

j.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2012-09-11 04:35 PM

Thanks J, I appreciate it.

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JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2012-09-11 04:38 PM

"There's no guarantee of crack of dawn"

Enjoyed the write. I do understand.
Loved the photo (It is the guarantee of
Life).

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2012-09-11 04:54 PM

Ah, many thanks, JL, nice to see you here today.

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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2012-09-19 11:56 PM

Nice writing...James

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2012-09-20 06:12 AM

Thanks...James

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Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2012-09-20 09:50 AM

I'm so looking forward to December 21...by that time, I'll be able to have more opportunity to read lovely poetry on a more permanent basis...

I don't know how I missed this one!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

10 posted 2012-09-20 09:56 AM

Sounds like a Christmas vacation, Karilea. Thank you for finding this one.

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