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Open Poetry #48

Hanging

JerryPat2
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0 posted 2012-09-09 05:46 AM

Hanging by a gist
          There's something we've missed
                    The gist gets murky
          Like last time we kissed

©August 15, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (09-09-2012 08:41 AM).]

Margherita
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1 posted 2012-09-09 08:34 AM

I guess the emotions of the kiss become the gist.

Well done.

Margherita

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2012-09-09 08:44 AM

That's a good definition, Margherita. Murky memories call for troubled gist. Or vice versa. Thanks always for stopping by.

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2012-09-09 08:58 AM

remember this

Lori

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2012-09-09 09:12 AM

Hey! That's not murky . . . Thanks for laying it on me.

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MARK V SHELDON
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5 posted 2012-09-09 04:12 PM

This is a good candidate for my Twenty Or Less... series -- concise and interpretive, just the way I like them!

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JerryPat2
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6 posted 2012-09-09 04:15 PM

Thanks Mark, appreciate you being here in my world.

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