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Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2012-09-06 07:07 PM

Nature

Nature in its wildest form
Stirs the spirit deep inside
No power could surpass the winds
No fury could outdo the tides

We search for reasons yet unknown
For nature’s unrelenting power
Then moved we are as equally
By sweet perfection of a flower

Elizabeth Santos

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

1 posted 2012-09-06 07:12 PM

Strength and power...
grace and beauty,
both are well described in your poem.
Enjoyed,
Ms. E

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-09-06 08:37 PM

Absolutely, Elizabeth, from majestic power nature unleashes we are in awe of it, to the perfect, beautiful rose which gives us a subtle catch in our throats. Nature. Perfection.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2012-09-07 11:55 AM

In a poetic style of king David, with the wisdom of old king Solomon,
and the humanity of Job… you have written an excellent exposé of God’s creation.

Beautiful write, Liz!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

4 posted 2012-09-07 12:38 PM

You display beautifully the contrasts between sheer fury and delicate perfection nature exhibits for us daily. Wonderful poem.

Michael

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2012-09-07 10:48 PM

Very nice...James

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2012-09-08 10:43 AM

Just wonderful, dear Elizabeth. There is fascination even at the edge of terror.

Margherita

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

7 posted 2012-09-08 11:55 AM

fine writing, nature and her ways are unique!

"The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts"
prasadnatarajan5.blogspot.com/

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

8 posted 2012-09-08 05:18 PM

As captivating as Nature, herself, Liz.

Owl

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