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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2012-09-04 10:21 PM

Giving Her Sweetest Kiss

"Lovers don't finally meet somewhere.
They're in each other all along."...RUMI, page 82.

The silk lady had told me
that she would meet me
where the shimmering waters
caressed the moonlight
as it embraced the skys;
The same place where we
had met many years before
when I was graced by the presence
of the most precious woman
that lived upon this earth.

Upon that night as I looked into her eyes
it seemed as if she was opening the door
to her heart...when I ask her for a kiss
she moistened her lips telling me that
if I waited for a season the nectar
would taste sweeter...then she reached
for me, telling me she wished to touch
parts of my heart that had never been
touched before.

As my heart embraced those thoughts
of our meeting before, suddenly the
silk lady was with me and as she came
into my arms, her moistened lips gave
me her sweetest kiss.

JamesLee
03September
2012

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-09-05 05:34 AM

Nice, James, very nice.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

2 posted 2012-09-05 07:02 AM

"where the shimmering waters
caressed the moonlight
as it embraced the skys"

Fine writing,Pure writing! Great visuals!

"The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts"
prasadnatarajan5.blogspot.com/

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2012-09-05 01:26 PM

Absolutely delightful and captivating, dear James. And Rumi's quote fits so nicely.

Margherita

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

4 posted 2012-09-06 01:11 PM

"Upon that night as I looked into her eyes
it seemed as if she was opening the door
to her heart..."

Nice write, James.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

5 posted 2012-09-06 07:13 PM

One of the most romantic poems I have ever read
Jst the notion of it will remain in my thoghts
Liz

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

6 posted 2012-09-06 07:24 PM

SWEET!
Ms. E

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2012-09-11 04:08 PM

then she reached
for me, telling me she wished to touch
parts of my heart that had never been
touched before.

So beautiful and romantic!!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2012-09-12 05:28 PM

Thank you Jerry, Pasad, Margherita, JL, Elizabeth, ebonygirl and Suthern for the wonderful responses...very much appreciated...James

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