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Skirting the Breeze |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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~.~ Like a satin weave draped in love and luxury the sun sets in pale rosewood shale blue clouds float and dip skirting the blue reefs as the breeze spins the twilight in faded silks breathing a still breath as seen through chiffon on a reflective pool whispers a calypso blowing in the night like diamonds sparkle in the sky. ~.~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
The music, rather the calypso has these verses and are a wonder to behold. Such a physicality caste system to represent us. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thanks for reading JP~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
"breathing a still breath as seen through chiffon" Very nicely done, my friend, really liked the calypso effect, and wish I had thought of those two lines... j. |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
The voice I hear in your wonderful poem reminds me of a Narrator introducing a long anticipated movie of a true and fascinating love story... Enjoyed, E |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
What a breath-taking sunset melting the day into night, Blues! Love it - my kinda stuff! Owl |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Well this is a calm and cool poem, desriptively lovely...relaxingly beautiful.. Thank you for posting Goldenrose. music was my refuge.i could crawl into the spaces between the notes and curl my back to loneliness - Maya Angelou |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Nothing quite like it, this is lovely.  |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
fine writing, brings so much calmness to the reader! "The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts" |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
So relaxing, soft, and sweet. Beautifully written poetry, Blues. (I think if I were a kid this would be the definition of cotton candy – absolutely yummy).  JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Such beauty you convey here, dear Lori! Exquisite! Margherita |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you so much for your kind words. It's nice knowing each of you were here and that you took the time to read me. YOu guys are great, and the best bunch of poets I ever shared a blue page with. Thank you always~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
What a serene and beautiful picture you have painted here, Blues. I think I will just dig my toes into the sand and enjoy it for a while. Ida |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I flowed right out of my office chair on the soft silken stream of your words... This is restful, peaceful... and so very beautiful! |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Like the softest, happiest sigh that lasts all brilliant morning. Capitol B Beautiful, capitol B Blues.. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Would love to be watching the sky and water in such a beautifully described paradise! A pleasure to read you again, Bluesy! Misce' |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
grand-fine imagery ... excellent 'write' as usual !! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thanks you guys for all your nice replies. They are always so very much appreciated. Big group ~*hugs*~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
i read it loudly, splendid and magic, the poem brings happiness and beauty, thanks a lot blue serenade, yann |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Could see it and feel it, dear Bluesy! Think I'll carry it with me into my day. So good to read you again. Helen |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Wonderful! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I'm v. glad to see this 'write' at the moment, back near the top of the 1st. page in "P.I.P.-land" by the cyber-sea! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Ya'all are so good to me. Thank you kindly. You leave me speechless!!  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
You are looking good, Lor. You must have the most wonderful views on the west coast. I always wished to see them for real one day. Hope all is well. And if you are ever in the east...  M |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I'm so happy you stopped by to read. Thanks girlfriend! |
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