Open Poetry #48 |
Sapphire dreams |
Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
* * * Blue Moon illuminating the sky, I don’t know why I feel so weirdly blue while looking at you. By playing hide and seek with clouds and trees you charm the night giving birth to sapphire dreams which dance in the light washing over your desolation concealed by your smile, everlasting and sweet. Blue Moon illuminating the sky, I don’t know why you keep me under the spell of your silver strings while you perform divine musical improvisations creating ripples of delight upon my soul deep within. Milliards of eyes gaze at you in adoration you represent a marvellous part of Nature and all those who feel touched by your beauty are filled with sacred awe and inspiration. Blue Moon illuminating the sky, I don’t know why I feel so weirdly blue while looking at you, but I know the way to fulfil my desires and needs as I gratefully gather your sapphire dreams. * * * |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
"Milliards of eyes gaze" Gotta love it, and I do whenever I see something I've not seen before. You have given the Blue Moon a most fitting rendition and wondrous appeal that reaches out and touches me and I'm sure those other who will read it. Very good, Margherita. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
BRAVO!!! Oh I love this one...you have written of it perfectly...very well done...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Jerry, for your loving comment. You have uttered the right word: appeal, indeed! The moon is a magical kind of "meeting point" for many lovers and friends who project their thoughts in the moon's direction ... where they collide and mingle. Margherita |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Karen, you too have been inspired to write a most beautiful poem about the Blue Moon and I am happy that you loved this one too. Thank you! Margherita |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I'm not surprised that you were so inspired by our beautiful, blue Pisces moon, Margherita. Ida |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Ah, you capture the mystical pull of the blue moon very well with this. Beautiful it is. Michael |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
I love sapphire and the way you used it color the beautiful Blue Moon in your wonderful poem, Margherita! Ms. E |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Ida, oh yes, the moon has its unique ways to stir our romantic heartstrings. Thank you so much for being here! Thank you, dear Michael, for your kind appreciation! With our sensitivity towards Nature, we experience closeness and oneness with our divine Creator, that's the magic. Dear Ebonygirl, thank you so much for your loving kindness. Sapphire holds magic that permeates us ... I love the color too. Love and a beautiful Sunday to all. Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hi margherita, this an exqùisite homage to the moon, i feel all people have feelings for this star and feel a bit like thatn Milliards of eyes gaze at you in adoration you represent a marvellous part of Nature and all those who feel touched by your beauty are filled with sacred awe and inspiration excellent yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you so much, dear Yann, for your loving comment. Good to see you here! Margherita |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
This is gorgeous literature. Enjoyed the read, and the picture too. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you so much, dear JL, for enjoying this and for commenting so kindly! Margherita |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Very pretty, Margherita~ Really love this color on you!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you so much, dear Lori, for telling me you enjoyed this. Margherita |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is just lovely - especially the last verse! *S* |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you so much, dear Ruth, for telling me you enjoyed my "sapphire dreams". Ahh, the moon, the moon ... it elicits our emotions! Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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