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A Beautiful Disaster Member
since 2007-01-13
Posts 409 |
When loneliness pierces your heart like a thorn, When memories seem to replay all your past, When some contradictory feeling is born To remnants of love that was not meant to last, Your temple of hope is about to fall, The shade of your sun is about to fade, The wheel of your life is reluctant to roll, It feels like a permanent dance on the blade. You search for the answer in every small sign, You trust every symbol, you wish on a star, You drown your grief in a glass of mulled wine You two used to drink in the same cozy bar. You find the salvation in bittersweet lies, In fact, it is clear like a crystalline ball: Just look at yourself with your destiny's eyes, You'll see love has never existed at all. Welcome to my website: |
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Nocturnal Pulse Member
since 2010-08-12
Posts 84Australia |
Love, more solid than any other feeling, can also become as intangible as smoke and vanish completely. I think it's safe to say nobody understands it, haha. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
beautiful share, love is so fragile we can ask for its proofs, thanks for the thoughtful and poetic share, yann |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
thanks for sharing this - well penned! Love is the life of the soul... |
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mvvenkataraman Member
since 2011-11-12
Posts 72India |
Dear respected A Beautiful Disaster, Your poem is penned very wisely Apt words are carefully chosen Really reading gives mind joy Thanks for teaching poem-writing. With best wishes, Yours truly, mvvenkataraman |
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