Open Poetry #48 |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan ![]() |
. How sunlight Lamplight Shines in your hair The slow curve Of emotion As you turn Your glance The song That is your voice When from another room I hear you call my name Oh I am no fool As well you know There are many Who think me hard Let these ways I feel About you being you Be our secret From the world . |
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Nocturnal Pulse Member
since 2010-08-12
Posts 84Australia |
Many relationships appear different on the outside, some indeed having a "hard" exterior. The real ones have that perfect harmony and love inside. That's what I took from it anyway, I really enjoyed this write. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thank you Truth is I’m a last woman met poet; she determines my lines; even my ostensibly nature poems are no more than metaphors. Men are marginally above machinery in my world; they fix my car etc. . . . otherwise, (except for one good friend whom I love as a brother), beyond the annoyance and harm they can or will do they hardly exist to me and don’t matter. Thanks again John . |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
well done ! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very well done, john... j. |
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