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Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2012-08-21 09:33 PM

She exchanged a sly grin
until those lives became hers to dance with
For utter joy
under the black fall of southern moss

Such is the exchange
where he met her under a soft rise
where the locusts, like stars, swarmed in groups
under his big, bright blue eyes

It is here that they call him by his first name
a nod to the mountain top
like soft velvet onto a wooden floor

It is here an exchange can become a heavy weight
like the shade that trumps the suns gaze
But, only if,
An exchange is never made.

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

1 posted 2012-08-22 02:50 AM

An exquisite rendition of 'What if it had never been', Tomer.

Owl

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

2 posted 2012-08-22 09:39 AM

Your poem speaks visions, intimately and deep.
Enjoyed, Tomer,
Ms. E

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2012-08-22 11:33 AM

Much enjoyed reading (and feeling) this my friend.

j.

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

4 posted 2012-08-22 04:29 PM

Thanks, Owl. The 'what if's' in life can always be intriguing. Happy you enjoyed.

Cheers

Tomer

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

5 posted 2012-08-22 04:30 PM

Ebony-

Happy it ran deep within you and most importantly, you enjoyed it.

Cheers

Tomer

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

6 posted 2012-08-22 04:30 PM

J-

I appreciate the feedback. Hope you're well.

Cheers

Tomer

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

7 posted 2012-08-22 06:36 PM

A soft and beautiful poem of what if...the vision was tender...a joyt to read...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

8 posted 2012-08-22 07:57 PM

Starttime-

Happy you enjoyed it so much. I appreciate the love, as always.

Cheers

Tomer

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

9 posted 2012-09-04 08:32 PM

You always touch a soft spot!

Beautiful expression, Tomer

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

10 posted 2012-09-06 12:19 PM

Blues -

I'm happy it touched you. Hope you're well.

Cheers

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