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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2013-08-12 07:53 AM

I imagined you dancing slow, just wearing music and my eyes
slipping down from some moment mound of warm secrets
on your tiptoes...whispering soft sigh woman sounds

I wondered of your lips when they smiled that morning
how they would form words and then release them
or how they would place a kiss at random there

then wait for it to be returned again even more slowly
and I felt the hands in my mind touching there
at your waist as if it were something gifted

with a only a bow wrapped around waiting to be undone

____________

daark

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2013-08-12 05:17 PM

Oh baby oh baby....unwrapping your poetry is always a treat.

So nice....

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

2 posted 2013-08-12 09:59 PM

I like this one.

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2013-08-13 07:20 AM

Babyblue...I do love how you undo the bows...thank you

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Juju...thank you for the eyes

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2013-08-28 07:31 PM

Nice things to imagine...James

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

5 posted 2013-08-29 07:37 AM

That first line...

I love unwrapping the gifts you leave for us here. Always a pleasure.

-Trina
I'll keep these dreams hidden
inside these eyes of mine
until my tears fall
unto my tainted hear

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2013-08-29 08:05 AM

James..thanks brochacho..

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Ms Sins...thank you lady

rosepetals36
Member

since 2010-07-09

Posts 137
Pa

7 posted 2013-09-11 09:59 PM

It has been long time since I've stopped in to visit. It is nice to see names I remember and finding that I still enjoy reading them

-- Used to be rosepetals25 :)

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2013-09-12 08:33 AM

Ms Rosepetal...thank you

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

9 posted 2013-09-17 09:49 PM

thankfully you write just as I remember.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

10 posted 2013-09-18 07:59 AM

Ms Suz....thank you for remembering

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