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Wind Song |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Wind Song I prayed for a wind song – a melody of honey treasure kissing at your ear. Playing tender touches in you hair, and softly stirring and tapping at you neck and shoulders… I watched the song play… A melody warmed in a morning sun, while you slept past our waking hour. For a moment I was jealous of your sleep – as it held on to you… I listened to the wind singing… In a moment, looking at you, I saw what loving a woman truly is. Such gentleness, as soft rose-petals of woven silk contours of a kisses on your lips, and coy teasing looks from your loving eyes. That wind song came alive and swept sleep from your eyes, and you smiled and hugged me gently to you. I prayed for a wind song – a melody of honey treasure kissing at your ear. Playing tender touches in you hair, and softly stirring and tapping at you neck and shoulders… Prayers are answered if you believe – listen… . . . Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. Maranatha! [This message has been edited by JL (02-03-2012 08:24 AM).] |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I'm not a praying man, but a hoping one, and I feel the two are connected. My hopes have been answered and I have what this poem speaks of. Very nicely written, JL. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Very nice, JL.. Wakes all of the senses..sight, sound and touch..a sort of human equation. The words of the poem, when added together equal answers that would satisfy any reader that is a romantic....:-) |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Who would not want to wake up to this glorious serenade. Simply beautiful... |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Thanks JP ================================= Thank you ice! Very kind words! ================================== Thank you Nicole. I am glad you liked! ===================================== JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is absolutely beautiful! I love the way the first verse is repeated at the end... followed by such wonderful advice!! Very lovely and romantic! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
suthern, glad you liked!! Thank you. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
JL the love and tenderness in this is palpable and once again you have moved me to tears Lori |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Lori?? Awwww... I didn’t mean to make you cry… I love your reply, very sweet!! JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Just lovely, my friend. A write of which to be proud. And, especially, I liked the words ... "For a moment I was jealous of your sleep – as it held on to you…" awesome. j. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Thank you so much, Mr. J. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
An extremely beautiful write... had a breezy feel, really enjoyed the read..amazing |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
And a hearty thank you to you, LJ... JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
Ah, who wouldn't fall in love with such a poem. I was truly swept away with this wind song, it brought joy to my soul. Always a joy to read your poetry.  |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
what a tender & touching write - loved it! Love is the life of the soul... |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Thanks ken206573, and tracie66. I appreciate the kind replies... JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I hear if I close my eyes and listen really intently. I see the love you have so poetically described. And I am happy that you have shared such intimate beauty with us. This is a song I will play again and again. xoxoo A |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Too kind Alison. Thank you so much! JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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