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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
She waited until the river high noon Her indelible feet like the small wrinkles of leaves that bestowed all around her She waited until the sea was quiet waves once standing on their high heels suddenly became the calm to the nights easy stare She waited with her mothers ears her fathers tears a burden so large Her thinly, veiled dress had finally lost its color Lost its shade in the writhing of her pain a place alone, a place she now calls home. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Dark. I like dark. I liked this. You have some interesting phrases. Unique. Thank you. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
WOW!!! you tear at the heart...great writing...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Poetry that touches the blue strings of the heart. Well done, Tomer. Ms. E |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Awww wow! This tugs at my heart! A poignant write, and so sadly beautiful!! |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Jerry, Appreciate the compliments. Happy it struck a cord. Take care. Cheers Tomer |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Startime- I'm happy it resonated with you. Thanks for the love. Cheers Tomer |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Ebony, Hope you're doing well. Happy you enjoyed this little piece. Take care Cheers Tomer |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Blues- I'm happy you enjoyed it so much. Hope you're doing well. Cheers Tomer |
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