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A Burning Flame
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A Burning Flame |
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Nigelinoz Member
since 2012-07-24
Posts 71Victoria,Australia |
There's a burning flame That lives in my heart Which becomes ablaze When the hour is dark There's a fire that burns within me. Burning deep within my soul Ablaze fuelled only by your sweet love Like some everlasting coal The blaze cannot be extinguished And it never will go dark It's burning deep within me Burning deep within my heart Burning only for you my sweet Burning just for you. Burning on my love for you Which forever will be true. You may as well give cherries to a pig as give advice to a fool- |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Nicely worded poem to your love, N'oz, and I hope the words ring just as true fifty years from now as the did the day you wrote them. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Nigelinoz Member
since 2012-07-24
Posts 71Victoria,Australia |
Thank You Jerry Pat,very kind words. BTW for anyone who is interested here is the ring I am giving Denise on Thursday in Salt Lake City.  You may as well give cherries to a pig as give advice to a fool- |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Your words are filled with deep love and passion...wonderfully written...I can see the smile on her face and in her heart as she reads these words...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
The ring is so beautiful...I am so glad for you that you are meeting her...have a wonderful time...*BIG HUGS* |
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Nigelinoz Member
since 2012-07-24
Posts 71Victoria,Australia |
Thank You Karen, Your comments make me feel humble compared to how beautifully you write. Thank You Cheers N'oz You may as well give cherries to a pig as give advice to a fool- |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You spill enthusiasm and bliss here, N'oz. Very lovely. And the ring is beautiful! So this is the day! Good luck! Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful romantic writing...James |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Beautiful poem ... beautiful ring! Ms. E |
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Nigelinoz Member
since 2012-07-24
Posts 71Victoria,Australia |
Thank You to everyone for the lovely comments,I really feel honored and humbled by the very kind reviews I have received here on pip. As I have explained before I really only began writing poetry as a way to try to express my love for my girlfriend,I try to put down in words exactly what I feel in my heart and it thrills me that more experienced poets here enjoy reading my work. By the way everything is going well here in Utah,Denise is as beautiful as I had hoped and she loved the ring. Thanks again everyone Cheers N'oz You may as well give cherries to a pig as give advice to a fool- |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I am so glad things are going well for you and your lady! The poem is beautiful... so is the ring!!  |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Definatey a good type of burning going on here. Enjoyed. Michael |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wonderful, my friend, and I'm sure she will love them both ... j. |
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