Open Poetry #48 |
Memory’s Café |
JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Memory’s Café Summertime when we were young strumming chords pretending words to songs we sung… Life then was such a delight, careless, forgiving, we were eager only for a cool evening breeze, a star filled night, and boastful moonlight… Pleasure in those moments – such glorious nights. We, too young to know to treasure such a time. Too young to see beyond the next, and the next. Summer gave way to fall: Winter was too soon, and around us all; and the moments of summer nights fleeting, and somewhere along the way those summer nights stopped to dine in memory’s café… . . Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You recall those special summers of youth so beautifully, dear JL. Your memory is uplifting, though delicately veiled with melancholy. To write about it now with such intensity, makes it a very pleasant experience of now. Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You're so right, JL. We gave not a thought of what we had and what it was all about. Now, of course they are just memories, beautiful memories, but memories nonetheless. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
I love your trip to Memory's Cafe...it brought back memories of my own...a wonderful read...*BIG HUGS* I love your signature qoute...perfect *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Thank you, Startime1955. I am glad you enjoyed, and that this brought back memories for you. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
JL so true about summer nights and the memories they hold. Enjoyed this very much Lori |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a tender and forgiving look back! If we'd known then what we know now... but we had too many tomorrows then to stop and consider each moment a precious gift. *S* Beautiful write! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Thank you sweet, suthern gal! Your replies are always so uplifting. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wow, great piece, my friend ... in my youth it was called "Frost Top" and equally divided between "Dairy Queen". Everything else as you described... Cool... j. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Dairy Queen... that's the ticket. Thank you my friend JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
It's amazing the way the characteristics of the seasons also depict the transitions of human life from youthful folly of summer all the way up the cold isolation of winter. What we were too naive to appreciate then, we most certainly do now in this cafe you've depicted. Nicely done. Michael |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Enjoyed the lovely vision of (many) summer nights in your poem, JL. Ms. E |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
From the title on down, I love this! Book marked! Miscellanea |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Michael: Thank you kind sir! I truly appreciate your words in reply. Ms. E: you are so right, many summer nights that stick to my ribs like an oatmeal breakfast… Thank you. miscellanea: I am so glad you liked it. Your words have me grinning ear to ear. Thank you!! JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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