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Open Poetry #48

Chicken Things And Broken Wings

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

0 posted 2012-08-08 05:07 PM

In garden's free flowers
there is no innocence lost
by life's offerings laced with calumny;
garden's soft successes
flaunt fire tongues licking brilliant tears
as moral choice resigns,
sequestered fears flow on enraged
to spend as waves on righteous rocks.

©2012 by icebox

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2012-08-09 12:39 PM

How profound and true ...

Excellent write.

Margherita

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2012-08-11 09:50 PM

you reach deep with this one...

Lori

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2012-08-12 08:41 AM

I agree...this poem goes deep into the soul...it made me ponder and that is a good thing...well said...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

4 posted 2012-08-17 10:11 PM

You are still here!!! there are a few of us old phart hippys around...Hope you've been well old man, always enjoyed your poetry and wit....

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