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Black Dog. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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Following my steps closely, panting deeply exhaled breaths, glowing eyes watch my every move,i see it out of the corner of my eye. Some days it is nowhere to be seen, always it returns back, haunting me,stalking me. This dark depression demon cannot be shaken off, my life constantly darkened, setting neat footprints into the winter snow of my soul,doggedly following. music was my refuge.i could crawl into the spaces between the notes and curl my back to loneliness - Maya Angelou |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Uh huh. Been there. Done that, buddy. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
I know the feeling of depression and I know the feeling of beating it...My heart goes out to you...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your analogy is quite good and your poetry is excellent reading, as always. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Maybe the dog just wants some attention. Ida |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You've written so well the sense of always being followed, never knowing when an attack may come!! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
you ... and Churchill ... me as well ... I call it the dark wolf instead though ... (I believe it to be one of the natural curses of poets and 'Romantics') ... exceptionally well stated ! |
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