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Nigelinoz
Member

since 2012-07-24

Posts 71
Victoria,Australia

0 posted 2012-08-04 11:31 PM

Just wish I could find the words
That would make the meaning clear
About why I just love you so
And why I want you here

Why I need you here with me
So I can shower you with love
Why it is so clear to see
You are an angel from above

An angel sent from heavens high
To bring the lords own prayer
That you and I on blue sky's fly
Share a love that is true-and rare.

A love that is so truly pure
That it completely fills my heart
A love that will forever endure
And that we shall never part

A love that will last you see
Until the end of time
A love which joins us-you and me.
And forever will our hearts entwine

You may as well give cherries to a pig as give advice to a fool-
Irish Proverb

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-08-05 07:12 AM

I sense within the lines of this poem desperation. I also sense clingingness. If a love affair turns into a clinging kind of love for one of the partners, it is doomed.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Nigelinoz
Member

since 2012-07-24

Posts 71
Victoria,Australia

2 posted 2012-08-05 07:23 AM

As always Jerry I appreciate your comments but don't know that I agree about clingingness,
we are just two people who have been alone for a long time and we are desperate to meet.
But as I said I always read your comments and
appreciate your sincerity.
Cheers

Amaryllis
Senior Member

since 2010-05-20

Posts 1306
Mi now

3 posted 2012-08-05 07:55 AM

A tender, devoted write

Best,
Amaryllis

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

4 posted 2012-08-05 08:40 AM

*grin*...I think you have found the words...well done...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Nigelinoz
Member

since 2012-07-24

Posts 71
Victoria,Australia

5 posted 2012-08-05 08:50 AM

Thank You Amaryllis and Startime1955 for your
lovely comments,I appreciate them sincerely.
Cheers
N'oz

You may as well give cherries to a pig as give advice to a fool-
Irish Proverb

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2012-08-12 08:29 PM

Enjoyed...James

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2012-08-13 06:30 AM

Any girl would love to receive such a romantic poem. Very lovely.

Margherita

Nigelinoz
Member

since 2012-07-24

Posts 71
Victoria,Australia

8 posted 2012-08-13 06:40 AM

Thank You James and Margherita for your lovely words,I appreciate your comments.
Cheers
N'oz

You may as well give cherries to a pig as give advice to a fool-
Irish Proverb

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