kindle spins and waterfalls

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Open Poetry #48

kindle spins and waterfalls

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2012-02-02 06:30 AM

you were giggle toys in tinfoil sounds
finding your fire already kindled
and wearing a woman around that store
walking those aisles without waterfalls

telling me that you found them attractive
and although you never went there
your bag had been packed since before
and you knew someday I would drive you

crazy is right next to the pool's deep end
and you shrugged your breasts in silk
to watch my eyes making observations
before you made everything soaking wet

and came to listen to my dry swallowing

___________

daark

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

1 posted 2012-02-02 06:51 AM

Drive someone crazy in a store? Yes, that sounds about right lol. I can only imagine..

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2012-02-02 07:00 AM

Ms Nicole...thanks babe...anything to keep you from shopping

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2012-02-02 10:30 AM

crazy is right next to the pool's deep end

And I've jumped in both too many times! LOL

I will (literally!) walk miles to see a waterfall, so of course your title drew me in... I'm glad it did! *S*

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2012-02-02 10:38 AM

ms Suthern..thanks lady!!

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

5 posted 2012-02-05 02:09 PM

crazy is right next to the pool's deep end

Sometimes a line jumps out and I fall in love. It makes me laugh as I read your poem. This did it for me. Of course, I love your poetry. Can't say that enough. But this is a perfect definition of crazy ... perfect.

xoxoxo
ali-san

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