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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2012-08-01 12:30 PM

you spoke your smile without word intrusion
just there, kind of like jewelry on lovely
and I wondered where the gold medal was
that you had won for your prettier olympics

like the gentlemen judges on this heaven side
of some counter counting heartbeats by tens
when you just whispered thighway sighs quietly
and pretended they were just there by accident

and we held up our scores with gloves on awkward
just to have more fingers than the others
so you might count us as favorite sighed smiles
and on occasion remember this momentary illusion

I wondered about your eyes and how they fit
just looking out over an ocean some afternoons
when you took your tan candy out to sweeten
the lips of some lucky breeze that savored by

when you spoke your smile without word intrusion

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daark

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2012-08-01 02:20 PM

I wondered about your eyes and how they fit
just looking out over an ocean some afternoons

What a beautiful, pensive image! *S* I like this very much, Dark!

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2012-08-01 05:29 PM

*sigh*...a vision of such beauty...wonderful writing...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2012-08-01 07:15 PM

You write it so fine DS~ The summer sun never felt so good.
Makes a gal feel young and lovely...and over exposed.

*smooch*

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2012-08-02 06:21 AM

Regarding the content of the poem....perhaps she was a painting that caused a whisper...perhaps she was a lovely mountain horizon that took the breath away...perhaps she was a river meandering down the valley of serenity...perhaps she was just a moment observed by a stranger between the blinking of the eyes.....

Ms Suthern, thank you my friend

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Ms Star, thank you lady friend

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Babyblue...awwww you look so good with your expose on, thanks lady.

Amaryllis
Senior Member

since 2010-05-20

Posts 1306
Mi now

5 posted 2012-08-05 12:02 PM

I know I've been a pest but I have never stopped loving your poetry, Dark. Another lovely, here.

Best,
Amaryllis

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2012-08-05 06:01 AM

Ms A, thank you

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2012-08-12 08:27 PM

More than a pleasure to read...James

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2012-08-13 04:40 AM

quote:
when you took your tan candy out to sweeten
the lips of some lucky breeze that savored by

It's all very appealing and the above two lines are true delicacy to savour by this reader.

Margherita

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2012-08-13 08:18 AM

James...thank you guy.

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Ms Mar...thank you lady friend

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

10 posted 2013-05-27 04:36 AM

quote:
you spoke your smile without word intrusion
just there, kind of like jewelry on lovely

Has anyone ever rendered a smile more beautifully?? I think not.

My second diving today brought me joy in reading this again.

Margherita

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2013-05-29 01:35 AM

A pleasure to read...James

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

12 posted 2013-05-29 03:39 PM

This last part floored me,...,reminded me of a day ....

"I wondered about your eyes and how they fit
just looking out over an ocean some afternoons
when you took your tan candy out to sweeten
the lips of some lucky breeze that savored by

when you spoke your smile without word intrusion"

Love it!!!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

13 posted 2013-05-30 07:06 AM

Ms Mar.....thank you

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James, thank you amigo

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Ms King...thank you lady for your eyes

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

14 posted 2013-05-30 05:09 PM

everything is lovely when touched by your words~~

M

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

15 posted 2013-05-31 07:17 AM

Ms MMs...thank you lady

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