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Open Poetry #48

Love For A Season

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2012-07-30 09:54 PM

Love For A Season

"Sometimes love is good
only for a season."

If someone we love
only wants to
give a season
how can we
demand forever...

JamesLee
30July
2012

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-07-30 09:55 PM

I've been trying to figure that out myself, James.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2012-07-30 10:01 PM

mmmmmI have to think about that...Made me think this poem does...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2012-07-30 10:02 PM

Thank you for responding Jerry...I was wondering if I should title this "Love For A Season" or "Demanding Forever" and you can see the choice...James

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

4 posted 2012-07-31 03:30 AM

I am glad you decided on that choice for a title, James. It has my vote too.

I agree with the contents of your poem, heart, soul and mind. Any insincere or forced (by the giver or the recipient) gift is an arrow through the heart of both giver and recipient. Sincere gifts should be revered as such - and the outcome should be accepted without malice when they end.

Owl

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

5 posted 2012-08-08 03:54 PM

wow...very nice!

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