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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Timelessness Even when the elements split the earth in me and fling my crumblings into the scattered emptiness of worlds ground to crushed chaos and smashed collision, your Love will be my beacon thru the rubble blinking in the nothingness, dodging past the brokenness and guiding me 'til end of Time. And when Night caves in from stars sucked out by Age leaving days and shattered suns slipping down Eternity at a million midnights per second, your Love will be my flame in the black wind blistering in the coldness, emblazing me with boldness and fusing me to your Love divine. And when I measure my Life, not by the number of breaths I take but by your moments which take my breaths away and not by the number of aches I’ve caged in heartbreaks but by your conquest of my plundered ones set free. Breathless may be the light of all precious stones but only your Love shines the polished gem of me. For I’m stained glass lost at night with a longing waiting mindless in a trembling fingered blindness for that moment rendered timeless when your Love dawns the darkness and I bathe in shafts of Light. Namyh |
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swampguy Member
since 2013-08-04
Posts 83 |
A haunting, masterfully written poem of one hundred percent devotion. You have a graceful style, but your phrases and word choices give even the gracefulness a boost to the fortunate reader. This is one hell of a poem, and my choice quote is . . . quote: ~*~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice to read...James |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
swampguy – My heart has been devotedly enraptured with another heart for a long time and our rhythm is ceaseless. I hope that when our bodies fall apart and crumble, the Love would transcend time and space until it reaches Infinity and still have enough momentum to vibrate one more step beyond. So with glee, I gave birth to this created work. It came out easily in one bold stroke and I didn’t even have to have a Caesarian this time. Whew! Poets! Thanks so much for your wonderful words of enjoyment swampguy. For me, they’ll be ‘timeless’ and a boost for this fortunate poet today. Namyh |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
JamesM – Ahhh Shucks James! You say the nicest things. So glad you enjoyed reading. Namyh |
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