Open Poetry #48 |
Telephone to glory |
Nigelinoz Member
since 2012-07-24
Posts 71Victoria,Australia |
It's nearly time to make the call. Pulse is quickening,heart is racing, breathing heavier. Palms sweaty It's ringing,she answers. What joy,what glory Oh the voice ,voice of an angel We talk of many things,we declare our love endlessly,we make plans. 2 hours go by like seconds And it's time for her to sleep Promises to call again tomorrow And as soon as it started she is gone And I'm alone with my thoughts and loneliness till the morrow. You may as well give cherries to a pig as give advice to a fool- |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Nice, very nice. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
That is the fate of love-tossed relationships. Hang in there. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Nigelinoz Member
since 2012-07-24
Posts 71Victoria,Australia |
Thank You JL and JerryPat2 for your very nice comments,I'm really starting to love this site,the comments I receive have really made me feel welcome. Thanks Again. Cheers' N'oz You may as well give cherries to a pig as give advice to a fool- |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
The sweet sound of the voice os someone you love is amazing and you have captured it well here...well done...both of you have my best wishes...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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Nigelinoz Member
since 2012-07-24
Posts 71Victoria,Australia |
Thank you Startime1955, I have to admit this long distance relationship is hard going but we are working on it and are committed to making it work. Thanks for your kindness. Cheers N'oz You may as well give cherries to a pig as give advice to a fool- |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It's hard when your heart is miles away... even harder when time zones have to be calculated. *S* Wishing you luck... enjoyed the write! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful romantic writing...James |
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Nigelinoz Member
since 2012-07-24
Posts 71Victoria,Australia |
Thank you suthern and James for your lovely comments,they are much appreciated. Cheers N'oz |
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