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Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2012-07-25 11:49 PM

She Needs

Don’t try to catch a cloud
as it drifts on strong winds
it’s shape will ever change
Join two thoughts into one
making a carpet ride
where fantasy takes you

Holding bubbles are hard
their skin tender to touch
sun-touched colors vanish
Touching souls brings both peace
strengthened with harmony
becomes one in purpose

Keeping her heart owns her
there’s room for resistance
and desire for freedom
She needs sharing of hearts
where love is eternal
and dreams can become real

Words weave magic to her
Words sing of Celtic life
Words touch the inner soul
Words lessen any fear

Karen Mc Neil
July 25, 2012

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

1 posted 2012-07-26 01:45 AM

Ah, love the reference to Celtic life... I could hear the flutes playing beyond the trees. Beautifully rendered, karen.

Michael

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

2 posted 2012-07-26 02:21 AM

Yes, She does need words, words and more
words. Well done Karen!
Smiles, Ms. E

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2012-07-26 06:59 AM

Love it. Love it! Words. Magical words painting a visual picture the poet happily, and sometimes sadly, shares with us.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2012-07-30 09:44 PM

Very nice...James

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2012-08-01 11:56 AM

She needs sharing of hearts
where love is eternal
and dreams can become real

I definitely understand her needs! *S* Beautiful write!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

6 posted 2012-08-02 11:33 AM

This is beautiful! I have a very soft spot for Celtic music. Love the imagery!

Lori

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

7 posted 2012-08-02 01:46 PM

fine imagery and Romanticism !

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