Open Poetry #48 |
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'Deep-Time' Dream |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! ![]() |
‘Deep-Time’ Dream A clear moon arcs its traceless path, in its own good time, over these sweet twilight mountain forests of shadow-dancing spirits, to an ancient Celtic tune playing the mind and heart, though attenuated now and vanishing like smoke and echoes of so much more … long-lost … that the ancestors knew. These rocks and ‘endless’ hills are but a sacred shrine in a ‘Deep-Time’ dream to all who ever walked here with infinitely humble curiosity and boundless, unfettered imagination. --- b. e. adams (7/24/2012) [This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (07-25-2012 09:41 PM).] |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
As I am reading this poem I am listening to "Celtic Pride II" both together make me want to go to a mountain meadow and dance in the moonlight...such stunning words bring the magic of your poem to life...I love it...and I humbly thank you for the vision that exists in 'Deep-Time'...**BIG HUGS** *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Haha! I'm not listening to anything I feel like dancing to, but I did manage to dance through your well-written poem and I loved it very much. You just keep putting these beauties out. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (07-25-2012 05:19 PM).] |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I hear that "ancient Celtic tune" when I read this and it is beautiful. Ida |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
love this one...... |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Loved this too, Ms. E |
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