Waiting for Success and Finding Failure

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Open Poetry #48

Waiting for Success and Finding Failure

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2012-07-22 02:17 AM

Waiting for Success and Finding Failure

Waiting for soon...
How could I succeed
when she took away
everything that I need;
her smile
her laughter
her lips
the tenderness
of her kiss.

Defining soon...
In the real world
I love you
means I love you
and soon means soon.

Finding Failure...
Honey I love you
but I absolutely hate
how you sealed my fate,
giving me no other choice,
only the opportunity to wait
and wait and wait.

JamesLee
21July
2012

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (07-23-2012 10:17 PM).]

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-07-22 06:53 AM

You have other options that you can't see now.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

2 posted 2012-07-22 02:43 PM

Waiting is a killer. Don't wait too long.

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2012-07-22 11:13 PM

Ahhh, now I see...waiting can hurt very deeply...wonderful writing...I feel for you...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2012-07-23 10:16 PM

Thank you JerryPat, Startime and suthern for the wonderful responses...James

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2012-07-23 10:18 PM

Jerry I believe a man sees what he wants to see based on what he wants to believe and he will hold on or let go according to those beliefs...James

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