Open Poetry #48 |
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No Plans |
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Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia ![]() |
Weekends never used to be long enough Now they stretch away into infinity Time with you was never long enough Now the loneliness never seems to end I built my life around being with you I feel like I was just a piece of yours And now you’re out getting drunk and over me And I’m home with a cat and no plans. I always thought that I was strong enough To live and do things by myself But without you, I feel invisible: Friday night with a cat and no plans I know you weren’t right for me I know I’ll find the one who is But for now, the tears fill the silence Almost 30 with a cat and no plans The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I know you are crushed,but even with a cat and no plans you seem to have the right attitude. ~*~ they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
yup..your feelings came though clear here and man can I relate!! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Good piece, my friend and an even better attitude ... always, always, sunlight after the night. Understand and empathize. j. |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
My heart breaks for you...I know the feeling of this poem...stay strong...your heart will heal while you wait for the right one...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Time with you was never long enough Now the loneliness never seems to end I have quite a few years on you... but oh, how I understand!! Excellent write!!! |
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