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Open Poetry #48

Forgiven

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2012-07-18 10:30 PM

Forgiven

Transgressions

melting away,

like the morning mist

under the heat

of the sun,

when you

are forgiven.

JamesLee
17July
2012

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

1 posted 2012-07-18 11:24 PM

I believe that Forgiveness makes us softer inside and more understanding...I need to forgive and fine happiness as I forgive...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

2 posted 2012-07-19 02:32 AM

Enjoyed your poem, James.
Ms. E

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2012-07-19 03:21 AM

Right on James and we all need forgiveness from time to time.
Eric

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

4 posted 2012-07-19 03:56 AM

Its hard to forgive someone, but I find it makes you stronger. Enjoyed.

-Trina
I'll keep these dreams hidden
inside these eyes of mine
until my tears fall
unto my tainted hear

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

5 posted 2012-07-19 05:18 AM

True, James.

~*~ they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2012-07-19 08:51 AM

How very true! Sometimes, forgetting isn't possible and we continue to flay ourselves... but knowing we're forgiven makes a monumental difference. *S*

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