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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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the best part of this latest empty is how quietly the door has closed and how the window always has warm looking in from the morning again or how the trees have become round instead of flat shadows standing guard like picket fences pretending to be sheep that one can count with dragging sticks or the hesitation in stranger's voices when they don't say anything special just passing time to another stranger like reading a book without reading or how short the nights have become when one fills them with teaspoons letting the moments be assigned sand and memory being that gentle breeze that can with predictability lose everything ____________ daark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-17-2012 12:31 PM).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I've read many of your poems - but never has one touched me so deeply. I can't copy my favorite parts because I love every word in every line. Tears may blur my eyes with every read, but this is one I'll read many times... it's going straight into my library. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Suthern Thank you lady friend D |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sometimes, DS...you hit the bone when you cut. Hugs! |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
OK...you took me for a ride and had me coming back for more...well done...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Martie...thank you sweet neighbor. ____ Ms Star, thank you lady friend for the glance dance |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You always make me question what was the inspire and you always deliver  Well done, m'friend. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
You definitely have a way with words. Thank you for sharing. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Sweetsun, thank you lady friend...just moving stones around under the sleepy water. ____________ Ms Marilyn, thank you ms |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I agree with suthern, I can't pick out a favorite line because I love the entire poem. It's stunning in its beauty. Ali-san |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Ali-san. Thanks little one. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your first verse gave me the warm fuzzies. The view from you is always painted with both a splash and attention to detail. That's what makes your dark colors come alive... for me. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Babyblue, your replies are sweet whispers that leave lipstick prints behind. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
i feel melancholy here, gently seductive though...and i read it again to feel it again |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Thank you Muted for the glance |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Love the touching imagery in this. Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Mar, thank you lady friend |
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